Aaron at Happy Valley High School in the change room after the game coming back in and removing his football equipment once again we notice a huge bruise on his arm .It's obvious that someone has grabbed him and left bruises!
"Hey Aaron what's up dude?'asks Deion a tall muscular young black man
"Nothing much my life's just falling apart!'says Aaron
"Nothing a new girl won't fix dude! Did you see that new hot thing in English class? she wanted to mack on you dude!''says Deion
"Not interested !'says Aaron
"Homie you got it bad!You should come gack with me tonight on my PS3 I got Aerosmith and two guitar controllers!Nick's coming over too!"then noticing Aaron's arm he says
Where did you get the bruise?You get a little too playful and your girl take you out!'he asks laughing
"Something like that!"says Aaron not wanting to explain
"Dude you get a lot of them bruises someone taking a whack at you?'Want me to axem?'asks Deion
"No everythings fine but thanks Deion!says Aaron
"Yah sure you can't fool the fooler but you don't want talk I aint going to drag it out of ya!'says Deion"I got some brewskis you come over tonight or not!Or are you
just afraid that Nick is going to smoke us ?That dude is trying to achieve Caesar status dawg!"
"Yes he is pretty good but I'm better!'says Aaron boastfully
"Dude dream on he's going to wipe the floor with us!'says Deion
"You're on tell Nick I'm going to beat him!'says Aaron
"You talking smack again Aaron I'm going to smoke your score easy!'says Nick coming up"You sure your old lady will let you out of the playpen for the night?"
"I haven't got an old lady!'protests Aaron
"You aint got no girl either!'says Deion
"Then homie we've got to talk!Did you see that new girl in English think her name was Keisha or sompin! She wanted to mack on you!'says Nick(a six foot tall guy with surfer boy looks blonde hair and blue eyes)
"You think she liked me ?'asks Aaron
"Dude she was hot for you!I told you!"says Deion
"If My Mom calls guys I'm studying at your house kay Deion!'says Aaron
"Your old lady still being a pain?'asks Deion
"I told you before ....begins Aaron as Nick interrupts
"Deion don't call his mom old lady!'
"Kay your mother then !!!Is mommy dearest a pain?'asks Deion
"I lost my scoalrship to UCLA and she's mad!'says Aaron
"Dude how did that happen you piss someone off?'asks Deion
"Must have somehow but I got to bring my grades up and got to Happy Valley U"says Aaron
"Take the night off and have some fun with us will cheer you up tomorrows another day!'says Nick
"Ya another day another chick!'says Deion"don't worry will cover you with your mother!'anniunciating Mother
As Aaron goes into the showers.Deion and Nick whip out their cellphones and text
We see it it says Party at Deions!!
Kathy's room Happy Valley Hospital flashback to just after Aaron fled
"No more stress Kathy !You have to keep the stress down and if someone is bothering you we can remove them!'says Dr.David Hayward
"Sorry Dr.Hayward I'll remember !'says Kathy
"I don't want to have to do that again Kathy those tranquilizers shouldn't be used a lot when your pregnant!' says David
"I promise I won't let that happen again I'll call someone!'Oh I'm so tired says Kathy
"That's the medicine working have a rest !Dr.Seabrooke will be here later today!'says David as Kathy falls asleep
Fadeout
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
Sheila, I really liked the dialogue between Aaron and his friends! Very realistic, talking about girls and whatnot, and the hidden anxiousness that Aaron has over his mom beating him and his life overall being a mess. It is really interesting to read..I like it. You have managed to shift my feelings towards Aaron around, full circle! I feel really bad for him now :(. Looking forward to this party at Deions, and whatever happens next!
ReplyDeleteThis comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad the dialogue between Aaron and his friends came off that way to you!I was hoping it would !Aaron like a lot of teens has a difficult family life that nobody seems to realize how it is effecting him!
ReplyDelete