Jenny and Mike are in the Martin kitchen
"So do you like pizza?'asks Jenny
"Yes I love pizza!" says Mike
"Good you can cook it!' Jenny says shoving the frozen pizza at the box at him!"Call me when it's ready!'
"Geesh was it something I said Mike mutters to himself as Jenny stalks of out of the kitchen
"I'm home!' says Tad coming in the house"Sorry I'm so late!'Mike are you cooking I'm sorry you should be having someone cook for you!You don't want to eat this cardboard pizza!Do you like Dominos?'as Jenny listens from the hallway
"Sure I love Dominos !'says Mike
"Good because it's two for one night and I'm hungry I'll order us two extra large pizzas!What kind of pizza do you like.Me I like it with everything so I like that extravaganza! Jenny likes the Brooklyn (that's a cheese pizza with pepperoni)!'asks Tad"and Dottie she likes either!'
"Yum sounds good Mr.Martin I'm hungry too!Do they take long?'
"Naw the guy knows m knows I tip well and usually I get my pizza with in 20 minutes!'says Tad
"So you order pizza a lot?'asks Mike
"What can I say it's an addictionI'm trying to cut back!'states Tad smiling
Flash to Jenny in the hallway
"Sure I asked for pizza yesterday and Dad says No! Mike asks for pizza and it's all what kind do you like and what can I get you?Can I kiss your feet!'Blah I hate him!"They are both rotten chauvinistic pigs!'Jenny says as she runs upstairs"they better call me when the pizza gets her and if he eats all the Brookyln pizza I'm going to be mad!
Flash to Dottie upstairs throwing on a robe and walking down the hall to the stairs
"What's the hurry Jenny?'she asks as Jenny breezes by her
"I'm just ,I'm just hurry to the bathroom says Jenny improvising looking as if she was guilty of something
"Oh Okay!'says Dottie not really up to Jenny's shennigans and letting it go
'Tad ?'yells Dottie from the top of the stairs
"Did you call my fair lady?' asks Tad waxing
"Hi!So what do you think we should make for supper? The kids have to be starving!'asks Dottie
"We are not making anything you are going to come sit on the couch for a little while !Have pizza on a paper plate and then it's back off to bed with you!'says Tad"where I will have my way with you!' bounding up beside her
"Tad the children!'says Dottie looking around "and pizza I thought you wre cutting back!
"It's okay Dottie they didn't hear besides were on our honeymoon!'says Tad"and I haven't had any pizza for two weeks!
"We are aren't we?'says Dottie happily"Our Honeymoon!'she says dreamily
"Yes we are but I also promised to watch the hockey game with Mike!"confesses Tad
"Well wake me up after the game and will take from there" says Dottie seductively kissing Tad
"I love you Dottie!'says Tad
"I love you to Tad !'
"Yuck get a room!" says Jenny catching them kissing but not hearing the other"is the pizza here I'm starving!'
'It should be here any minute see there's the doorbell!' says Tad just as the doorbell rings
"That will be $28.96 sir!' says the pizza guy handing Tad the pizza
"Here you go!" says Tad handing him two twenties
"Your change sir!" says the pizza guy
"No just keep the change!' says Tad "and thanks for the great service"handing the pizza boxes to Mike and Jenny.
Jenny and Mike go into the dining room and get out paper plates ,Jenny starts serving her Dad and herself leaving out Dottie and Mike
"Aren't you forgetting someones Jennifer?'asks Tad slightly annoyed
"Sorry says Jenny trying to sound contrite as she puts a piece on Dottie's plate and
hands it to her!Then she puts a piece on Mike's plate and says "Oops!' as the pizza slids off his plate onto the floor!
"Oh I'm so sorry!' she says and sounds quite sorry but as the camera pans in we see the face she's hiding she's smiling maliciously!
Fadeout
Wednesday, March 3, 2010
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LOL!! This one is definitely one of my faves now, *LOVE* it!! Loved that first part with jenny and mike, where she gave him the frozen pizza. Then Tad came and scrapped that idea, and got Dominoes instead! Jenny is totally jealous..and that ending where she was smiling was perfect, hahaa!! This story was great, because of the strong dialogue and the character-driven aspects! I really enjoyed reading this all around, I love your stories!! ;D
ReplyDeleteOh BTW, do you even see these comments? Like, do you get an alert telling you that you get them? I can't tell. Reply here if you do, ;p. Oh BTW, if you didn't know, it's me Spencer. LoL!
Yes I can read your comments I'm glad you're still enjoying it Spencer! My alert doesn't seem to be working!
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