David on the phone after he drops Colleen off
"Thanks Vincent there will be an extra $100 dollars for you for that one!Colleen is Ryan's sister you were spot on! and that Martin thinks he's the only PI in town!What you were just so grateful I saved your daughter!Well that's my job !Thanks again Vincent!D avid says smiling again and hanging up his cell then driving home!
One week later
Aaron at home alone enjoying his mother being gone.Answers his cellphone!
"Deion yes that was a rad party last week !Yes I'm glad you and Nick tricked me.'"Yes my mom is still gone!No she's not coming back until tomorrow!Party here?'I don't now Deion if anything gets wrecked my mom will kill me!'Aaron says in to the phone as we see Deion on the other end
"Come on homie we could have a small party not a big blow out like last week just a few girls some brewskis and some Lady Gaga chicks love Lady Gaga!'says Deion
"Not fooling me Deion you love Lady Gaga and not just for her music!'says Aaron
"Well dude she's so hot!'says Deion
"Yes she is hot "says Nick coming in on a conference call!
"Glad you could finally join the conversation bro!'says Deion"I was trying to convince our home boy Aaron to have a few chicks over a small partee` !'says Deion
"Come on Aaron man up and have some girls over that chick Keisha was so into you at the party last week.If you had shown her some interest she wouldn't have been yours man!'says Nick
"I don't know!'says Aaron wavering a little
"Is it Kathy come on man she dumped you !Were young hot and available and your old lady's gone so come on Aaron !Do a brother a solid Jayla and I haven't been alone in a week!'says Deion
" I got one on the hook her name is Mariah!'says Nick
"Are you talking about Mariah Frederickson?asks Aaron"that girl is smokin!'
"I thought Mariah was in to that dude Logan Linden?'says Deion
"That rich boy she dumped his ass!'says Nick
"And she settled for you?'asks Deion laughing
'Come on you two okay partee is on but just the three girls okay!If anything happens to anything here I'm dead!So those are the only people invited!'says Aaron relenting
'Will be there at seven and I'll bring the girls!' says Nick
Kathy at home at Tad's
"I'm so bored 'Kathy says to Jenny
'What have you got ot be bored about princess everyone is falling over themselves to looka after you even Dottie!says Jenny bitterly
"Jenny I'm worried about you !you're becoming cruel and your borderng on obnoxious!what's up sis?'Waht's going on with you?'asks Kathy
"Like you'd really listen besides I'm not suppose to upset you!'says Jenny
"I'm going to get more upset if you don't tell me what is wrong Jenny so spill!'says Kathy
"Everything has changed Daddy has a son in residence he doesn't need me and he has a wife and a perfect daughter (that's you)so what does he need me for?'asks Jenny
'Jenny we all need you!You are my little sister whom I adore you're a brat at times,a little self centered but if I need you you're there.You have a geniune sweetness that can make people smile and I know that if you reach down deep inside you can find a little compassion for Mike!He has no one .He needs us !'Daddy loves you with all his heart and Dady needs Dottie!This is the first time I've seen him truly happy in years would you take that away from him?'asks Kathy
"Oh what do you know you think you know everything Kathy Martin but you don't!You don't even know that Aaaron has moved on !'says Jenny maliciously
"He has not!That was mean Jenny I want you to leave my room now!'says Kathy
"If you don't beleive me you should go see for yourself!' says Jenny as a parting shot slamming Kathy's bedroom door.
"Jennifer Martin were you bothering your sister!'asks Tad annoyed at the banging of Kathy's door and wondering what Jenny did
"Everything okay Kathy?'asks Tad looking for a change in her color
"I'm fine Dad !I think Jenny needs sometime with you though!'says Kathy
"Yes your probably right but Mike has hockey tonight Dottie is working which would leave you all alone!says Tad
"Dad I promise you I'll be fine I'll keep my cellphone close by!You'll only be a couple of hours three at the most anyway go and have fun!Jenny needs some time with you!'says Kathy
"I don't know!' says Tad torn
"Go I insist!'says Kathy
'Okay but I'll have my cellphone on if you need anything you call! Understand ?says Tad
"Understood now go make Jenny happy and tell her!'says Kathy
"Jenny how would you like a date wih your old man?' asks Tad
"Really ?'says Jenny happily and excited
"Yes really! Now put on your glad rags and let's go!'says Tad
"Oh Daddy I love you!' says Jenny hugging him and then running off to change!
"Looks like Kathy was right Jenny needs some time with Dad!'says Tad out loud
Jenny and Tad leave
Kathy watches the television in her room flipping the channels finally settling on American Idol!
"Oh my goodness what makes some of these people think they should audition ?'Kathy says out loud as her phone rings
"hello ?'Kathy says as we see Emma on the other end of the phone
"Hi Kath!It's Em!'says Emma
"Oh hi how's NYC?'asks Kathy
"Boring I didn't even get to see a broadway play they were all sold out! We're coming back early Aunt Caitlin says she has to get back to her patients!I swear that woman is wound too tight!Anyway Daddy managed to get a flight that leaves this evening!'says Emma
"I'm sorry you were bored but I bet you'll be glad to get back to AJ!'says Kathy
"Yes!' says Emma "it's not the same talking to him on the phone!"But anyways the reason I called Kathy Aj told me soemthing and at first I thought about not telling you but that would make me a really bad friend considering it's about my cousin!"
"Spit it out Emma!What rumor did you hear now?'asks Kathy
"I heard ...um I heard that Aaron was having a get together that include Keisha Edwards!'says Emma
"So so she comes to his place for a party big deal!' says Kathy puting on a brave
tone
"It's more than that Keisha has been ogling him for awhile now she wants him!I heard she's really experienced too if you know what I mean!"says Emma
"Really Emma so she's going to his party like I said big deal!'says Kathy protesting
'Kathy this is a makeout party !'says Emma
'I don't believe this Emma you shouldn't spread gossip like this I'm hanging up "says Kathy hanging up
Emma tries to dial back but gets several hang -ups and then a busy signal!
"So shoot the messenger!' Emma says aloud and then goes to board her plane!
Kathy thinks for awhile an hour or so then gets up and gets dressed leaving the house to go to Aarons
Flash to Aaron at his party the guys are all talking and start making out with the girls Deion takes Jayla into Aaron's mom's bedroom.Nick starts making out with Mariah right in front of Keisha and Aaron
"Sorry Keisha some guys are rude come on !'Aaron says taking Keisha by the hand "will just go in my bedroom and talk"
"that's good!" says Keisha smiling
Once there they start kissing however and Keisha takes off her top lying down on the bed in her bra and panties
Kathy arrives at Aaron's and finds Nick in the living room making out with Mariah covering her eyes she goes to Aaron's room !There peering into his room after opening his door she sees:Keisha in her bra and panties and Aaron beside her lengthwise on the bed kissing her.
Kathy gasps grabs her heart and runs out of the house!She gets just inside her home and collapses just after she calls 911!
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I LOVE how your write for the teens Sheila, seriously. It's as realistic as can be...you have the lingo and everything down! Loved Deion and Aaron talking, reminded me of the kids at my school! The whole atmosphere is evident and recognizable to me, veery relatable indeed. Great job! The ending was intense, I can't believe Kathy had to see that :(. But I also can't believe that she called 911?? LoL! But this was a great story, and I like how you had Emma call Kathy and tell her about the party, and alos the added drama with Jenny feeling left out....these types of stories, I would like on the real AMC!!
ReplyDeleteSd wait, David already knew that Colleen was Ryan's sister??