Sunday, March 28, 2010

Happy Valley-Part 5-Aaron and Caitlin's story

Annie in Aaron's room in labor.
"Ah Tyler er Tyler!' Annie says tentatively
"Yes Annie "he says fawning and as he looks with suprise at Annie sees the pregnancy mound Annie's water breaks
"I think my water just broke!' Annie says looking down"the baby is coming someone has to stay with Aaron!'
"Mrs.Dottie Martin said she'd be right back she said she went for coffee!explains Tyler
"I can't leave Aaron I promised Emma!'says Annie through clenched teeth as a contraction hits her
"Come on Annie we need to get you some help!says Tyler
"I'm sorry I didn't tell you about this baby'she cries "I was flattered you know and I like you!'says Annie
"I'd still like to go out with you maybe in about a month?'asks Tyler
"You're just saying that to get me to leave!' says Annie huffing and puffing as another contraction hits her
"No mam I just think that you need someone to deliver that little one and well even though I took first aid this is a hospital you should have a doctor!"Tyler says grabbing a wheelchair and putting Annie in it.
"But what about Aaron?'asks Annie
" He'll be okay for five minutes I'll come back as soon as we get you help!' says Tyler taking Annie down the hall
"oooh this really hurts!' says Annie breathing heavily
As Caitlin sees her chance and runs to Aaron's room
"My poor baby!'says Caitlin"who did this to you?'Come on baby wake up for Mommy!'
"Who are you where Tyler?' asks Dottie entering the room and setting down her coffee!'hands on her hips not hearing what she said to Aaron and not being able tosee Cailtin's face for the mask
'I'm a surgeon Dr.Erin Anspa!I was just checking on my patient Mr.McGillis here!' Caitlin who has now slipped into the Erin personna says through the mask
"And how is he Dr.Anspa? asks Dottie still wondering why this doctor looks so familiar
'Aaron is doing a little better but it will take time!'Caitlin says
"And the coma what will he ome out of that?'asks Dottie
"He is in a coma?'Cailtin says slipping up as Dottie pulls off the mask and says
"Catilin it's time to turn yourself in you need help!'says Dottie
"Your not talking to that simpering Cailtin ,honey your talking to me!'says the voice out of Cailtin's mouth
"So to whom am I speaking too?' asks Dottie bravely
"I'm Patrick !Caitlin let's me take care fo her messes she can't handle!'says Patrick(Caitlin)
"Caitlin must have had a lot of troubles to have to let you take care of them for her" says Dottie flattering this personality
"Yes she did !'I shouldn't have pushed the boy that was an accident!'says Patrick(Caitlin)
'I know it was you love the boy too don't you?'says Dottie using psychology
"I do I admit I've knocked him about trying to knock some sense in the boy but I wouldn't deliberately hurt the boy!'says Patrick(Caitlin)
"I believe you !'Dottie says sincerely
'You know I like you I don't really want to hurt you!Caitlin loves your boy and he has been so good to her!Not like that waste of life husbnad of hers!Him she could have done without!'says Patrick(Caitlin)
"Of course you don't want to hurt me you know I would ever do anything to hurt Caitlin!I think of her almost like a daughter and if she and T.J. get married she will be!' says Dottie smiling and reasoning with Patrick
"But if I let you go you'll tell someone you saw me!'says Patrick(Caitlin)
"What makes you think that? I'm a mother I know the need to see ones child when they are ill or in trouble.I know Caitlin had tosee her child.I think that Caitlin needs some help to help her dealw iththings besides you.Wouldn't you like to sleep Patrick you and was it Erin I spoke to before?'asks Dottie
"You are very smart yes that was me says Erin(Caitlin)"Patrick I'll take care of this you rest !'she says as if talkingor arguing with another person
"Thn you heard all I said Erin?'asks Dottie
"Of course I did Patrick and I hear all that's how we take care of Caitlin.I mean I adore the girl but she couldn't handle the stress of tieing her own shoes you know?'explains Erin
"So does Caitlin know about you two?'asks Dottie
"You mean we three?'her voice slipping and lowering to become Emma
"Who are you?'asks Dottie
"we really shouldn't be talking and telling you our names but I like you and somethinga bout you is trustworthy!The name is Emma!I'm Cailtin's mother the mother she should have had!'says Emma(Caitlin)"I look after her wellbeing too!sometimes I just come out to look after my grandson Aaron.He such a dear boy!I was so angry at Patrick for what he did !"Were you looking after him and staing with him is that why our here?'
"Yes Aaron is such a dear boy!'says Dottie
"I new it I told the others that's why you were here!Caitlin wants to be here but we will be caught here so will you romise to look after our boy?'asks Emma(Caitlin)
"I promise I'll look after him!'says Dottie sincerely and if I'm not here T.J. will be!'
"Fine then but try not to let Ryan hang around to much his bad influence that boy.He used to con people when he was a boy and I don't think he's changed much!Aleopard doesn't change his spots and like his Daddy he's a con!'says Emma(Caitlin)"just in case you don't relaize none of this is Caitlin's fault it was her Daddy and her real Mama's fault and that Robert Gardner and that MacGillis pig!'
"Why don't you tell me about it!'says Dottie "I'll listen !'
"I believe you would but we have to go before Caitlin's caught! Please don't scream you'll only upset Aaron!And don't struggle we're going to tie you up with this cord and put this pillowcase across your mouth so you can't scream.We're not trying to hurt you we just can't let Caitlin be caught yet !She can't handle this yet!'says Emma(Caitlin) who then turns into Patrick(Caitlin) before Dottie's eyes as Patrick(Caitlin)ties her up!
Cailtin once again escapes as Dottie struggles to be free!As she hears a baby crying down the hall
Fadeout

2 comments:

  1. Is Annie having a boy or girl child? I can't remember if you've wrote it in before lol. But I am so happy that he\she is finally coming!! I hope there are no serious complications with the baby or anything, i hope she has a clear delivery with no problems! Lord knows she's had enough, LOL!

    Loved all the Caitlin stuff, wow this girl is so crazy lol!! you are crafting this really well. Dottie is really great in this to. I really thought things would be somewhat resolved by the end, but then Caitlin escaped AGAIN lol!! She reminds me of Janet Dillon :P. Still love your stories!! Oh BTW, did you get my comments for the other stories down there?? Or, did this comment I'm writing right now even show up :O??

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  2. I mentioned before that she was having a boy!Caitlin has some more stuff to do!And yes If you can see your comments I've been talking back to you below them!thank-you for letting me know how you feel about the stories it's much appreciated

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