Happy Valley Hospital
Kathys' room
Kathy is watching her television!Aaron enters her room
"You didn't call me! Why didn't you call me?"Aaron asks
"Why would I call you?' asks Kathy looking defiant
"What is the matter with you you almost died I hear and you didn't call me?'asks Aaron
"I didn't see you call me or find out what was going on!'states Kathy
"I didn't know about any of this!'states Aaron
"Right you had your head in the sand you didn't know I was kidnapped and rescued or that I was in the hospital!'says Kathy sarcasticly and then seeing Aaron's face she says "you didn't you really didn't!'
"Kathy I would have come sooner if I had known are you okay?'
"Sure I'll be fine!' says Kathy not wanting to tell him anything
"Oh thank goodness I was worried!'says Aaron sounding worried
"Yes I heard from Melanie how worried you were! 'states Kathy angrily
"So I took out Melanie big deal we were broke up!'says Aaron
"Yes and you didn't wait long did you?'states Kathy "what was it the next day you were kissing her?'
"We were broke up!'states Aaron puzzled
"Did you even talk to me again to comfirm we were broke up no!You just took advantage of me slept with me and dumped me!You got what you wanted didn't you!'says Kathy angrily
"That's not fair you wanted me too!You begged me to sleep with you!'says Aaron
"How dare you I had taken a pill I wasn't in my right mind and you just took adavantage!I hate you Aaron McGillis !'
"I did not i was your boyfriend and you wanted to your acting like I raped you!'says Aaron
"What do you call it when you weren't in your right mind!I hate you (gulps air here)Aaron (gulps more air )McGillis Kathy says clutching her chest as the alarms go off!
The nurse comes running in followed by David
"You why are you here ?nurse call security and have this kid removed!'says David as he attends to Kathy
Alarmed Aaron gets scared and takes off!Aaron arrives at Happy Valley High School and enters the change room .There he starts putting on his football equipment on but not before we notice a huge bruise on his arm .It's obvious that someone has grabbed him and left bruises!
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Monday, March 8, 2010
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Oooo!The plot thickens! Poor kid!
ReplyDeleteI can't believe Aaron didn't hear about Kathy's kidnapping at all! What exactly was he doing, LOL?! The argument between them was prefect, though. You put in all the elements. The fact that he wasn't there, the night Kathy took the pills and he basically took advantage of her, the fact that he moved onto someone else the next day, everything!! It was great and very interesting to read, I like how Kathy calls him "Aaron McGillis" whenever she says his name lol! very interesting short story....now I feel bad for Aaron, he has bruises on his arms, oh no!
ReplyDeleteAaron is a football jock !His grades are slipping because he hangs out with the guys to often!so he didn't pay attention to the news!
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